Wrote eight pages of Episode One tonight. Ought to be forty-five pages when complete.
I think non-Doctor scenes need slowing down - they're a bit quick at the moment, probably influenced by the 2005+ Series. Some nice talky scenes could serve the story quite well, particularly if Doctor scenes are allowed to remain fast.
Still, though, I'm getting a grip on Sinead. She's not wonderfully realised at the moment, and the script will need some hefty editing once both episodes of the story are done (and, indeed, once more of the series has been written), but I'm pleased with it so far.
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